Haiku: Musings On Pride And Mariachi Melodies... |
Pride lies under foot
Caught by delusions, grand schemes
All is vanity
Tombstone marked for Pride
Lies here, pompous warrior
Consumed by conceit...
This week, the prompt/word is: Pride
What is a haiku?
As Leo of Haiku Heights aptly explains, a haiku is a three line poem. It shows what the author wants us to understand from it, rather than tell it directly. The limitation to a haiku is seventeen syllables. It can be at maximum, that much. If you wish to go by the traditional Japanese structure even with English haiku, you can use a 5-7-5 syllable, or 3-5-3 syllable structure
"To stop the flow of music would be like the stopping of time itself, incredible and inconceivable." Aaron Copland
Haiku: Musings On Pride And Mariachi Melodies... |
My mariachi
Heady melodies at noon
Lovers fight, make up
Mariachi tunes
Laden, old country love songs
Caught between rich foods...
Today, the word is Mariachi (Mexico)
What is Carpe Diem? Blog Owner, Kristjaan Panneman, describes it as: "a weblog on haiku. It's a new daily haiku meme where you can write a classical or non-classical haiku on a given prompt. Haiku is an ancient Japanese poetry form. A haiku has three short lines and describes a short moment (as short as the sound of a pebble thrown into water). Mostly a haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables and is sometimes called 'counted verse.'"
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"Nothing has been purchased more dearly than the little bit of reason and sense of freedom which now constitutes our pride." Friedrich Nietzsche
Haiku: Musings On Pride And Mariachi Melodies... |
Sets pride and bravery aside
Drinks guileless words, Praise
Idle folk at home
With no loss to limb or soul
I'm proud of you too?
Some Food for Thought: Do you see yourself through pride eyes? Have you heard mariachi music before? Take a moment to contemplate what Pride and Mariachi mean to you? Love and Peace in 2013.
I would love to hear from you: Please leave me a comment. Thank You!
PHOTO CREDITS/ATTRIBUTIONS: All Photographs: Pride, Mariachi, Pride, via Wikipedia, my personal collection.
Until Next Time…
Ask. Believe. Receive. ©
Elizabeth Obih-Frank
Mirth and Motivation
Positive Kismet
Pride and music can be able companions, if pride concedes to music and music applauds pride. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully compiled post. The image and the words, wow.
ReplyDeleteAnd many thanks for your comments on my blog :)
country love songs and rich foods - sound like something I would enjoy having.
ReplyDeleteI've long been a fan of heady mariachi melodies, whether at noon or some other time!
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Lovely post Kîshmet all haiku are wonderful and different. I like the way you've been inspired by Mariachis . Thank you for this positive energy you share.
ReplyDeletePride can be crippling. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThe pompous warrior
ReplyDeleteThe prideful soldier
What do they fight for?
Conquest not justice
To take what others have
Imperialism not honor
Yet the band plays
Songs of love as soldiers die
Lost in irony
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Thank you for all the nice comments on my blog.
Cheers!
JzB
TY DS! I'm making a lot of effort to connect with others in the haiku group and so far, people have been welcoming. I love haiku and hope to keep it up even if I do it a few times a week. TY for the feedback.
ReplyDeleteEliz
Hi Hazel, TY! You had me laughing. I was actually referring to the traditional, old country music in Mexico. I love Cumbia and some of the older musical arrangements. :-)
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Great take on the pic. Enjoyed both.
ReplyDeleteWell said !!!
ReplyDeleteYour haiku are well crafted and the pride one very true. Nice pictures and I like your quotations also :)
ReplyDeletean intriguing post today,,,.I cannot really connect music and pride, except on a superficial 'songs of pride' level...that being said, I espec. like the atmosphere you created in your mariachi set.....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted haiku, Eliz. I enjoyed the images you painted with words.
ReplyDeletesuperb, rich blog and am enjoying the haiku!
ReplyDeleteGreat reading ;-) thank yoi
ReplyDeletePride is a delusion Eliz, well said!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done. I like the play of pride with mariachi music. I have several Mexican and South American students who have great pride in there music, which, of course, includes mariachi. :-)
ReplyDeleteTwo, terrific haikus. I enjoyed the miriachi haiku a lot.
ReplyDeleteI love this whole selection of work. Thank you for sharing and inspiring us :)
ReplyDeleteMark, I'm a fan too even though my allotted time is limited... TY :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
TY Kristjaan, Your offerings are inspiring too. ;-)
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Kendall... True; it can be crippling and blinding too. :-) TY!
ReplyDeleteJazzB, Quite true and the irony continues in the photo I added... TY! :-)
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ReplyDeleteAye TY! Green Speck... TY! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh Tigerbrite! I appreciate the comment and thank you. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Joanne, TY for your comment. Pride of culture can be reflected in music...and other areas of living. ;-)
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TY Ese! Loved the visit... :-)
ReplyDeleteTY AnthonyN ... you are so kind! It was fun to do even as I struggle to learn it. :-)
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Yer Pirate, Glad to see you here and appreciate the feedback. :-)
ReplyDeleteBrudberg Merci! Love your haiku too. :-)
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ReplyDeleteTY Reshma, My yoga teachers always talked about the Maya of pride... especially of the vanity kind. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Dana, I like that... Cultural appreciation is being proud of our heritage and that is a good thing. TY! :-)
ReplyDeleteTY Write Girl! I enjoyed writing that one too... I could see and hear the music. :-)
ReplyDeleteTY jrbhaiku!
ReplyDeleteThis a lot more fun than I had imagined... :-)
Eliz
so true about the pride paradox.Beautifully-crafted post as usual. Thank you Eliz! Your blog inspires me...
ReplyDeleteWonderfully crafted, Eliz
ReplyDeletewhenever i saw a mariachi, i remember antonio banderas haha
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